Using Xerxes1. [/] They are possessed by an angel.
(He kinda becomes an "angel" sooo)2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon. 3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie. 4. [ ] They are physically strong.
(He'd like to think so, but no)5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour. 6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color. 7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red. 8. [ ] Their eyes change color. 9. [/] They have wings.
(Ehh eventually)10. [/] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
(Ascend to a god-like state and you get a free pair of wings, call now AND ALSO GET A TAIL)11. [/] They are immortal.
(Basically. Several millions of years counts doesn't it)12. [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular. 14. [ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
(Yes ladies get in line to date the three-limbed sterile socially awkward giraffe)15. [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc. 16. [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. 17. [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. 18. [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. 19. [ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. 20. [X] They are a healer. (Battle Medic yooo) 21. [X] They are from a very rich/royal family.
(Well he was until the whole gun fiasco) 22. [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. 23. [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents. 24. [ ] They ran away from home.25. [X] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (hIS DAD SHOT HIM aND THEN TrIEd tO DROWN HIM YEAH I'D SAY A LITTLE CRUEL)26. [X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (he saw his mama pass away but she was old and had a good life so it was all good)27. [X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
(HOW ABOUT PART GOD haha get on his level)28. [ ] They never knew their parents.
(I bet he wishes he didn't)29. [X] They were abused/spoiled as a child. (DID I MENTION THE GUN I THINK I DID)30. [ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 31. [X] They have lots of friends/no friends. (
He has a bunch of cool friends/siblings)32. [ ] They are emo/cutesy. (He's too kawaii for your BS)33. [ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. 34. [ ] They are currently in a relationship. 35. [ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.37. [ ] They have an emotional disorder. 38. [ ] They struggle to stay sane.39. [ ] They are a psycho. 40. [ ] They have multiple personalities. 41. [/] They are very intelligent. (Eh he's no genius but he is the alternate universe equivalent version of an ER surgeon so he has to have SOME kind of smarts) 42. [ ] They have hallucinations. 43. [ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 44. [X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
(Have I introduced you guys to the Leanov Entity yet)45. [ ] They have a guardian spirit. 46. [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them. 48. [ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.49. [ ] Some part of their body glows. 50. [/] They have a rare/unusual name. (Idk there are people named Xerxes right? Like historically?)51. [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. 52. [X] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
(He was 8 and Naomi was 2)53. [ ] They are connected with a certain element. 54. [ ] They are connected with a certain animal. 55. [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'. (He wears his uniform a lot????)56. [ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
( I don't think so what do you guys think?)57. [/] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.
(In the world he lives in type B humans are very rare because any human that passes through an interdimentional "portal" will become sterile, i.e. no babbies) 58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared. 59. [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives. 60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something. 61. [ ] They have a rare blood type. 62. [ ] They cry blood.63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown. 64. [X] They are from a different country to where they live
(try a whole 'nother universe)65. [ ] They are very mysterious/dark. 66. [ ] They are very lively/happy. 67. [ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. 68. [ ] They are very patient. 69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins. 70. [x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (He
kinda has to wear the arm brace to prevent his dysfunctional limb from getting in the way)71. [ ] They have amnesia. 72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 73. [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.74. [ ] They are 'the chosen one'.75. [ ] They have insomnia. Overall Points : 15 I think---Point Reduction ::Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::1. [ ] They smoke. 2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 3. [ ] They are overweight. 4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 5. [ ] They have a short temper. 6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others. 7. [ ] They do not care much about others. 8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.9. [X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
(I could make you a listttttttt but I won't)Total: 1RESULT :14
05 :: Anti-Sue.Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.26 :: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.